I don't know if I'm missing something, but I don't know how to actually load any saves besides from the main menu the click-able images don't seem to give me the option on my windows laptop.
Also my suggestion is if you want to add in more routes with the crew of the ship have them branch off of the sudden three main choice on who to spend the evening with. Like you choose John to open up an opportunity for Max's route or spend time with Mike to open up Rex's route, since these characters seem to influence each other a good deal early on.
Idk about coding, but after you return from broadmore to your previous office and home Nick somehow appears and talks about visiting the interview with you and talking to Julia even if you don't encourage him to apply and go alone. There might be a few logic jumbles and word typos id be willing to notify you about if i ever come across and I have high hopes for this VN's future. Try not to over work yourselves because it sounds like a lot of work is ahead if your team and you are trying to complete 3 routes by the end of the year. If I were you I'd dedicate at least 5 months to the writing of storylines and dialogue as well as gathering and obtaining CGs and sprites lmfaoo.
I also want to ask if the main menu is lyell outside the kingdom of the MC because then it looks like he finally got to explore places other than his own land. Also will we ever get an explanation for the beginning lol.
You have a very lovely game here and I can't wait to see where you take this. I love lyell, but I want to ask if he is the only love interest in this game.
If you ever consider a grammar checker, I'm able to assist on a fair amount of mistakes. But I could also miss some, if it deals with commas lol. (Edit: COMMAS lmfao)
I saw the potential in this game and can't wait to see where you take this game with time. If I may ask, do you have anyone else proof-reading besides you; I wouldn't mind contributing to the help if you want, but that just depends on you and my schedule allowing it. Id love to help.
Do you guys have any future plot hooks that could lead to the death of a person in this game and if so will there at least be one route to save them all or are some death minimums gonna be unavoidable.
Sorry for botching Bok's name lmfaoo. He seems like an nice person, but is dissapointed with his magic allignment, possibly from a generational expectiation of a certain power and he subverts that 'tradition' which might make him dissapointed, I think of this because of remington saying that some family's children can have different powers than the normal for that family; which would be a good tie in. But I don't know how the story will progress, he just seems like a softie with a prickly exterior at the moment lmfaoo.
Hey Healer Main, I played through your game and it was a wonderful time, was uncomfortable at the noncon scene, but loved telling on him immediately. I found a continuety error when talking to Remington the second time. If you didn't talk about the schools of magic the first time and select it when talking to Remington the second time, the conversation can come across jaged because he says he can't wait to find out MC powers tomorrow when hes just about to do it and also the conversation just doesn't seem to flow correctly. I also had a hunch MC might be crazy powerful and can just multiclass lmfaoo so im kinda looking right rn. Love Box and Bryce don't know about the others, but I might still play through their routes.
Hey Rook I have another small inconsistency in the phone conversations with Zoe. With some of the options you can choose you get Jude's and Quinn's numbers before Zoe gives them to you; and this is reflected in the dialogue later with her only giving Elliot's in the dialogue. But in the conversation only with her it shows all three phone numbers. This could be fixed by having the mc say a line that she must've not known about Quinn giving them Jude's and his numbers or simply removing those two when you choose to visit the library with Quinn. This is a minor flaw and doesn't need to be addressed immediately, but I just wanted to notify you of it.
I might just be a stickler for anatomy details but do you think we oculd at least make his ears or tusks larger, usually an indicator of male elaphants, if im not mistaken, otherwise his design is pretty cool and the color palates are nice. Also what if when threatened he forms his ears into the like hood shape of like a cobra; i dont know, just small suggestions.
I previously played through all the routes and found some typos, wonderful game, I'm glad to see the phone history typo correction was implimented into the update. Hope youre having a wonderful day and try not to lose sleep over getting the updates out exactly on time. People are willing to wait if your health will be compromised otherwise. I loved Jude's route in the previous update and can't wait to see what you've added this time around. I'll try and keep out an eye for any typos patreon people missed if youd think that'd be helpful.
I'm over here wondering if Ben and Bryan's relationship with even be long term in the end since he seems the type to not want to stay commited in a relationship. I mean he wouldn't cheat on someone in a relationship, but I don't see him as a person who would be happy in a monogomous long term relationship with Ben currently because of how he acts and his personality. What I am really asking is later down the line is his opinions on relationships gonna change or is it going to be only short term with Ben like he states that he would give true love up forever before giving up sex forever.
SPOILERS concerning some typos. I can distinctly remember that when asterian is browsing the internet and asks if it has anything on him. The name that tells us who is speaking says you or something not "Asterian". There was a typo that I found earlier, but I can't remember where. Overall the game is fun and it was a blast doing a replaythrough a few months later; even if very little has changed. Can't wait for V. 1.5
Apologies, but I didn't run into the error a second time when I skipped through the dialogue to see if it would pop up. I am 90% sure the error occured after mason said he would keep to the 'date' plans with Elliot. It might be best for now if anyone experiences the same thing in the future to advise them to not start freaking out until quitting and reloading their game.
I'll try and provide you with context around the area, but I won't be able to provide screen shots at least not on my laptop, I'm a bit inept lmao, I could test out the phone version and see if it shows up there. if not I'll send the text immediately before the error page :3
Okay so I restarted the game and it fixed the issue, but I don't think I saved the end of Elliot's route. But in case more people run into this problem and a patch hasn't come out yet. You could reccommend that they try and restart their game before panicing.
I have a concerning thing to tell you. I ran into an error page ya know the type you can press ignore and keep going. Well apparently it wiped all my save files from before the message and every time I tried saving again it brought the sam error message back, couldn't even save before it pops up. I'll try and restart the game and pray otherwise I'll go through Aiden's route by speeding and go through Jude's route with the perfect choices I am figuring out lmao. If you need to know I am running the game on a windows laptop. I don't know if other types of pc's or phones will run into this problem.
Not really in my opinon. It would just make the Hyena at the gym queer, which it's fine if he's not, I just mentally put that together through my speed playthrough of Elliot's route.
Okay I just speed runned through Quinn's route and I have *SLIGHT spoilers concerning a typo* When Zoe goes to hand out whoevers phone number you don't have I says she only gives you Elliot's, but if you look in the conversation it shows Jude's and Quinn's numbers which we already got earlier.
So Rook, you said you have been giving little hints at what Mason's powers are every update. Does the patreon subscribers have a better chance of figuring it out. That's fine because they are financially supporting the development of this game. Also if I guess it correctly can I get a cookie lmao.
Also I'll try to play through all the routes and give you my feedback if you would like. Though I have complicated feelings cause I always feel like I'm cheating on the original one I went with lmfaooo; even when I can't choose the name >.<. Hope to hear back from you. So far, your game has been a joy to play through. Give my thanks to Hugh, Melo, and Shuik; you too lmao.
Also if you look up ashnikko's deal with it (official lyrics video), amazing song, the font they use for the music video might be another option to model the german shepard's, I fogot his name lmao, font after. Though if you try it out you didn't get the inspiration from me lmao.
I haven't noticed caught any other grammatical errors. So I am quite impressed. Usually I spot like one or two typos, but whoever looks over the script is very thorough and I give my thanks to them lmao.
*Slight spoilers concerning a typo* When Zoe incessently texts the mc to tell them that she is coming back to help Quinn collect his things. For a brief moment you can see the texts above and if you customized the name for the mc the original name "mason" shows up. It's a tiny discrepency in coding and it doesn't need to be fixed immediately, but it was something I observed. Your game is a very wonderful experience to play through and I hope to see it through to the end. HOPEFULLY no one has to die lmao. The mysterious text at the end of each day worries me lmao
There is a typo in the conversation with Rob's boss. They talk about the hockey team and use the word they instead of their when talking about the teams actions. I may be wrong, but it was a typo that I noticed. I really enjoy the game and can't wait for future updates.
